Most characters in fics are done of the shows characters however if you alter a character you must always remember what you alter, if you state in a fic the character is wearing shorts and no shoes and later say he kicks his shoes off you create a confusion gap
also when you change physical appearances its better to save those changes and read them over before you start updating or working on fics, that way you have the image fresh in your mind
its unwise to go into to much detail when it comes to height, weight, ect, if you fill the story with to much detail all at once the reader can get board and stop reading.
it is better to spread the information out a bit like saying. Naruto pulled on a gray jacket before leaving the house, that way the story can keep flowing and the readers know he's wearing a jacket.
No comments:
Post a Comment